Tuesday, October 29, 2013

Submission... Final Projects...

1.  Journal-

What do you have to complete to be successful in class?  What's upcoming that you have to worry about?  Also, turn in essays up front!  The sooner you rewrite for a star, the better!

2. Final Projects....

Let's finish the drafts in class and complete the final version at home-  Half of the bullet points beneath each heading.  I'll choose the ones I think are best to model in class.


Topic:  
 My Knowledge of English 101 Concepts.


Audience:  
 EB


Purpose:   
To prove I know what I should know based upon the WPA guidelines bullet points using my own work from class as evidence.
EXAMPLE OF FINAL PROJECT LAYOUT



Rhetorical Knowledge


  • Focus on a purpose
DEFINE:
This means that I have a reason for writing and I can stick with that reason throughout my essay.


EXPLAIN:   


It is evident that I know how to focus on a purpose since in my narrative essay my purpose was to entertain and I focused on that throughout the essay.  In my first paragraph I wrote, “…………………..”  This, I think, is entertaining, and that is the reason I wrote the essay.  Later, in paragraph 2 I wrote, “……………..,” and that proves that I am sticking to my goal.  Finally, in my last paragraph I wrote, “…………………,” and from all these examples, it is clear I can focus on a purpose.
  • Respond to the needs of different audiences
  • Respond appropriately to different kinds of rhetorical situations
  • Use conventions of format and structure appropriate to the rhetorical situation
  • Adopt appropriate voice, tone, and level of formality
  • Understand how genres shape reading and writing
  • Write in several genres

Critical Thinking, Reading, and Writing


  • Use writing and reading for inquiry, learning, thinking, and communicating
  • Understand a writing assignment as a series of tasks, including finding, evaluating, analyzing, and synthesizing appropriate primary and secondary sources
  • Integrate their own ideas with those of others
  • Understand the relationships among language, knowledge, and power

Processes


  • Be aware that it usually takes multiple drafts to create and complete a successful text
  • Develop flexible strategies for generating, revising, editing, and proof-reading
  • Understand writing as an open process that permits writers to use later invention and re-thinking to revise their work
  • Understand the collaborative and social aspects of writing processes
  • Learn to critique their own and others' works
  • Learn to balance the advantages of relying on others with the responsibility of doing their part
  • Use a variety of technologies to address a range of audiences

Knowledge of Conventions


  • Learn common formats for different kinds of texts
  • Develop knowledge of genre conventions ranging from structure and paragraphing to tone and mechanics
  • Practice appropriate means of documenting their work
  • Control such surface features as syntax, grammar, punctuation, and spelling.

Thursday, October 24, 2013

Arg Cont. + Final Projects-

1.  Journal- 

What's one thing you are concerned about in our class?  Why?

2.  Groups and editing...


1.  Do they have a thesis?  Underline it.

2.  Do they have at least 3 "......" per body paragraph?

3.  What's their purpose?

5.  Are they using in-text citation correctly (Berge)?

6.  What strategy, logos, pathos, or ethos, are they mostly employing to convince?

7.  Underline/circle any typos or parts you don't understand.

8.  Slash through banned words: has, was, were, have, make, take, etc.

9.  Is the format, MLA, correct on the first page? 

10.  Give the writer a compliment.



3.  Final Project Introduction-


4.  HW-  Complete arg essay and submit on Tuesday

Tuesday, October 22, 2013

Evaluations...

1.  Now is the time when we're allowed to complete evaluations.  I'm not allowed to influence them whatsoever, so let me give directions and then leave the room.  When you're finished, you can leave and make sure to return with at least 3 paragraphs of your argument essay completed.


Thank you!


Thursday, October 17, 2013

Arg, cont.

Journal-  Check out these images here.  Pick one, or I can, and tell me what you think it means, based on the context and the picture.  (Explication, kind of)

Class discussion-  What can we learn from "Brains?"

Work Cited and In-text citation question time.

"I'm stumped or stuck."  What process questions do you have?

Review of common mistakes in Arg.

Commercial presentations?

HW-  First two body paragraphs due Tuesday.


Tuesday, October 15, 2013

Portfolio List


Portfolio List·  Reverse order. 


"Web of Risks" on page 432 and answer questions 1-4 under Reading Closely and 1-4 under Examining
Structure and Strategy for class discussion and your portfolio.
·         
 Presentation evidence
·         
 C/C essay and drafts
·        
 C/C outline
·         
 Hamlet Explication
·         
 Glass Houses Explication

Explication in class test:  Eggs--basket.
·         
 Reading and Questions:  Struck By lightning 1-6, 1-4
·        
Descriptive Essay and Drafts
·        
 Chapter 5, definition of cliché, three examples of cliché plus summary and 5 most important points.
·        
 MLA format practice page.
·        
Notes
·       
  Journals
·        
Assorted In class work
·         
 Grading of Mother Nature using 6 traits.
·        
 Origami Crane
·        
Narrative Essay and related drafts and documents.
·        
 A Hanging-  10 TS questions.
·       
  Mother Tongue and 10 TS questions.
·        
Diagnostic Essay.  Mark Twain  “Art of Authorship.”
·       
  Last page of syllabus
·        
Library tutorial

Arg, cont.

0.  Journal - Place your outline on your desk for me to review while you work on....

1.  Journal 2-  What topic have you decided upon?  What side are you on?  Why?

2.  Logos, Pathos, Ethos, presentations, cont.

3.  Works Cited  (in class notes)

4.  In-text Citation. (in class notes)

5.  Common Mistakes. (in class notes)

6.  HW-  Reading and Questions:  677...."3000 Brains"  Questions:  1-5 and 1-3 in the first two sections.  Please be ready to discuss on Tuesday.

7.  Upcoming HW-  Next Tuesday, return with your introduction and first body paragraph completed.

Thursday, October 10, 2013

As a journal, please write your research question on the board.

Discussion and narrowing of topics.

Questions to thesis.

What's next?

Research

Outline.

What should my OL look like?  What's a good way to keep track of sources?

HW-  Invention, Research, Planning.

Tuesday, October 8, 2013

Portfolio List



Portfolio List-


1 diagnostic essay.
3 groups of thinking skills questions with or without answers.  Hanging.  Mother Tongue Salvation
1 group of questions about readings from the text. Struck by Lightning. 
1 Library tutorial.
1 Origami Masterpiece
3 examples of explication.
3 essays with related drafts and planning.
1 group of notes.
1 group of at least 3 in-class exercises.
10 journal entries.
The first page of a presentation: logos, pathos, ethos.

CW contest

Hello Happy Writers:

The Maricopa Colleges Creative Writing Competition is open. Students registered at any Maricopa Community College are eligible to enter. There is no entry fee.
Deadline is Friday, November 15, 2013.

For details and submission guidelines, visit:

Presentations, 1/2 groups... and list.

1. Journal:

 Review your essay.  Write down any areas where you might have problems.  If you don't have problems, check the list of words attached to your essay and notice if/how you overuse them.  Or, if you don't have an essay to review, what's one concern you have about writing a research-based argument essay?  Why?

2.  Portfolio List... Groups and me... Decisions.

3.  Presentations... Logos, Pathos, Ethos.

4.  What's a question you have about something controversial?  Be ready for discussion on Thursday.  Also, Thursday, presentations continue.  Further, please read "Web of Risks" on page 432 and answer questions 1-4 under Reading Closely and 1-4 under Examining Structure and Strategy for class discussion and your portfolio.

Thursday, October 3, 2013

Test.... Moving towards Arg.

0.  Read aloud!  Please?

0.1 Attendance

0.2  Essay Check

1.  Test!  You know it's about explication, and then we'll never discuss this again.  We'll act like it never even happened.

There are various cryptic ways older people might offer younger people advice. The proverb, "don't carry all your eggs in one basket" is one of those ways.  It is intended as goal-setting and investment advice that means...

It means this because....

2.  Important notes-- Groups.

3.  Model ad analysis.

4.  What's next-- Presentations.  More argument notes...

Tuesday, October 1, 2013

C/C workshop, Arg Explication, cont.

Journal-

How did outlining, planning, help you complete your draft?  Why is this a valuable step in the writing process?

Explication

In our plan to prepare for our argument essays, we'll continue working on explanation and exposition.  Please complete the following paragraph.

    In this scene of R&J, Juliet proclaims that she would rather “leap” off a tower, “walk in thievish ways,” “lurk where serpents are,” be chained with “roaring bears,” or be stowed with “dead men’s rattling bones” than marry Paris.  This means Juliet abhors the idea of marrying Paris.  This can be concluded because…..

Groups

Please read a class mate's essay and answer the following questions on the back

1.  Does the introduction introduce the topic and provide readers with some background knowledge?

2.  Is the last sentence of the introduction a thesis with grounds and an opinion?

3.  Do their body paragraphs contain facts about the topic?

4.  Are their body paragraphs in the order provided by the thesis?

5.  Did they follow one of the organizational plans?

6.  Circle any typos or obvious mistakes.

7.  What's one thing they could improve?

8.  What's one thing you like?

9.  Is there a conclusion that restates the thesis?

10. Do they have a good mix of sentences?


HW-  Have C/C essay ready for submission on Thursday.