Thursday, May 30, 2013

 1. Journal-  In class

2.  Essays and groups...

3.  MLA format:  Here

4.  Lottery Groups...

5.  HW----  Read "The Lottery."  Create 10 TS questions for another to answer.

6.  HW-      Create an Origami Crane, unless you're Sarah.  Then create an Origami ?.



No Way Mistakes:

a.  Tense shift.  I love to eat when I was hungry.

b.  PNA-    Someone who is cool has all the tricks; they know how to...

c.  VTA-  I loves to eat.

d.  Comma Splice: (CS) I love to eat, I love to cook.

e.  Run on:  I love to eat I love to cook.

f.  Parallelism:  I love to ride my bike, walk the dog, and watching movies

G. Fragment:  A part of a sentence.  A piece.

H.  Sentence ; sentence.

I.    Commas:  Introductory phrases and clauses.   When I went shopping, I bought.

                       To separate two sentences with ,and ,or ,but ,yet ,for:
                       
                        I love to bike, and I love to eat.















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