Tuesday, September 10, 2013

Editing: self and in groups...

1.  Journal:

Read your own paper out loud with a pencil.  What did you notice?  Why?

2.  MLA Check groups...

2.5-  MLA workshop?  Lab?

3.   No Way Mistakes:

a.  Tense shift.  I love to eat when I was hungry.

b.  PNA-    Someone who is cool has all the tricks; they know how to...

c.  VTA-  I loves to eat.

d.  Comma Splice: (CS) I love to eat, I love to cook.

e.  Run on:  I love to eat I love to cook.

f.  Parallelism:  I love to ride my bike, walk the dog, and watching movies

4.  HW-  Bring your final draft to class on Thursday.

5.  HW- Read another story.... The Lottery.  Do not answer or create questions...

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