Workshopping, cont.

1. Journal-  essay checks.


Common Mistakes...

1.  Fragment.
2.  Comma Splice
3.  Run on
4.  Tense shift.
5.  Verb tense agreement.
6.  Parallelism.
7.  Pronoun Antecedent Agreement
8.  Comma after introductory elements-



3.  Epic Essay Battle

Mother Nature V.  Storm Country.  (See me if you'd like to read the whole, short essay).

Which is better?  Why?   


4.  Closing and what's up-

Descriptive Reading:  "The Deer at Providencia" on page 150 plus the first set of questions 1-6.
Descriptive Reading:   "The Vietnam Wall" on page 176.
Descriptive Reading:   "Facing It"  on the world wide web with no questions.