Friday, September 11, 2015



2.  Notes Quiz

3.  Groups and grading...  Read this student essay and using the 6 traits rubric  below, give it a score from 1-36.






6
Exemplary
5
Strong
4
Proficient
3
Developing
2
Emerging
1
Beginning
Ideas & Content
@  main theme
@  supporting details
·   Exceptionally clear, focused, engaging with relevant, strong supporting detail
·   Clear, focused, interesting ideas with appropriate detail
·   Evident main idea with some support which may be general or limited
·   Main idea may be cloudy because supporting detail is too general or even off-topic
·   Purpose and main idea may be unclear and cluttered by irrelevant detail
·   Lacks central idea; development is minimal or non-existent
Organization
@  structure
@ introduction
@  conclusion
·   Effectively organized in logical and creative manner
·   Creative and engaging intro and conclusion
·   Strong order and structure
·   Inviting intro and satisfying closure
·   Organization is appropriate, but conventional
·   Attempt at introduction and conclusion
·   Attempts at organization; may be a “list” of events
·   Beginning and ending not developed
·   Lack of structure; disorganized and hard to follow
·   Missing or weak intro and conclusion
·   Lack of coherence; confusing
·   No identifiable introduction or conclusion
Voice
@ personality
@ sense of audience
·   Expressive, engaging, sincere
·   Strong sense of audience
·   Shows emotion: humour, honesty, suspense or life
·   Appropriate to audience and purpose
·  Writer behind the words comes through
·   Evident commitment to topic
·  Inconsistent or dull personality
·   Voice may be inappropriate or non-existent
·  Writing may seem mechanical
·   Writing tends to be flat or stiff
·  Little or no hint of writer behind words
·   Writing is lifeless
·  No hint of the writer
Word Choice
@ precision
@effectiveness
@  imagery
·   Precise, carefully chosen
·  Strong, fresh, vivid images
·   Descriptive, broad range of words
·  Word choice energizes writing
·   Language is functional and appropriate
·  Descriptions may be overdone at times
·   Words may be correct but mundane
·  No attempt at deliberate choice
·   Monotonous, often repetitious, sometimes inappropriate
·   Limited range of words
·  Some vocabulary misused
Sentence Fluency
@ rhythm, flow
@variety
·   High degree of craftsmanship
·  Effective variation in sentence patterns
·   Easy flow and rhythm
·  Good variety in length and structure
·   Generally in control
·  Lack variety in length and structure
·   Some awkward constructions
·  Many similar patterns and beginnings
·   Often choppy
·  Monotonous sentence patterns
·  Frequent run-on sentences
·   Difficult to follow or read aloud
·  Disjointed, confusing, rambling
Conventions
@age appropriate, spelling, caps, punctuation, grammar
·   Exceptionally strong control of standard conventions of writing
·   Strong control of conventions; errors are few and minor
·   Control of most writing conventions; occasional errors with high risks
·   Limited control of conventions; frequent errors do not interfere with understanding
·   Frequent significant errors may impede readability
·   Numerous errors distract the reader and make the text difficult to read

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