Monday, October 19, 2015

1.  Drafts on the table-

2.  Journal-  What's the topic of your essay?  What's the purpose?  Who is the intended audience?  Do you have a works cited?  Do you have in-text/in-sentence citation?  Underline all of these words in your essay.

3.  Pull out all of your work from class and let's do grades.  See the previous post for what you need.

No Way is a little harsh.  Every word is valuable.  These are just overused:  be aware.




NO Way Words
Good
Great
Like
Show
Beautiful
Very
Really
Stuff
Things
I believe
I think
Can
Could
Would
Should
Get
Getting
Gotten
Nice
Like
Happy
was
Anything
Going
Most
Many
Pretty
Ugly
A lot
Often
Better
Feel
Be
Been
Being
Worst
Bad
Okay
Average
Same
So
Started
Best
Greatest
were
By
Amazing
Awesome
Cool
Lame
Had
Done
Doing
Worse
Everything
Something
Nothing
About
Gave
Make
Take
Took
Taken
Made
Making
Gone
Give
 
 
Grades-  Calling you up to show me stuff...

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