1.  Attendance-

2.  Drafts in the GB

3.  Journal- 

Did meeting with others about your draft help?  Why or why not?  What can you do if it didn't help?  What could you do to be a better editor for others?

4.  Groups and meetings.

0.  As you read, circle what you think is a mistake.  DON'T Correct it!
1.  Is this interesting?
2.  Does it feel like the writer is thinking about words?
3.  Would you tell this story to another person?
4.  Is there a message in the work?
5.  What's the topic?
6.  Who's the audience?
7.  What's the purpose?
8.  Is it missing anything?
9  Is it too long?
10.  Is it in MLA format?
12.  What would you change?
13.  Give the writer a compliment.


HW-  Finished draft due in class on FRIDAY!