Monday, April 11, 2016

Essay Time- Planning the end.

Work on your essays!  Get them started/finished.

Final Meeting Dates and Times:  This is when you've earned stars on all your essays, and you show me all your work to earn a grade.

FINAL MEETING DATES AND TIMES


April 27

10.00-  Cheyanne
10.10-Katia
10.20  Cheyenne N
10.30-kyanna
10.40-Aggrey

April 29

10.00  Wendy
10.10   John
10.20  Omar
10.30  Esmeralda
10.40  Jamesha

May 2

10.00 Jose
10.10 Hellen
10.20  Yesenia
10.30  Jillian
10.40  Yukiko


May 4

10.00 Karyanna
10.10 Vickie
10.20 Eduardo
10.30 Dinah
10.40 kaveon




Final Project Assigned:  Due at your meeting day.

Final Project:  Write a 7 paragraph essay that proves to me you've improved in 5 areas of writing. To prove it,  provide me examples from your essays/drafts that show the area you needed improvement in and show me examples from your essays that demonstrate how you've improved.

Simple Example:

I've improved in writing complete sentences.  In one of my first essays, the narrative, I wrote using comma splices like this: "...................,"  and like this, "............................'" but after learning what a comma splice is, now I am able to avoid that.  In a later essay, my descriptive essay, I wrote this sentence:  "..............................." and in my problem solution essay I wrote this, "........................................"  Thanks to my hard work, I am able to notice when I make that mistake and correct it and that is just one of the areas I've improved in.



Special Note:  5 ALP Students at the 4/25 11-11:50 meeting in the Student Union.

HW-  Getting stars on essays-  Finishing the last essay.

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