PP format.

TS

F:  For Example

O:  This shows that

O:  This also shows that.

F:  In Addition

O

O

F:  What’s more.
O

O

CS

From a formatted paragraph to a perfect paragraph-

1.       Change transitions.  Only use 3-4 per paragraph.

2.       Combine sentences.

3.       Lengthen with extra facts or opinions.

4.       Mix the order.

5.       Use 2 simple sentences, three compound, three complex sentences 3 compound/complex.

6.       No banned words.  Very really Awesome, cool, good bad, had have has was were

HW-  Create a paragraph using the paragraph format using this topic sentence:

TS:  ___________ is the best sport/movie/?